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Friday, April 17, 2009
Episode 6

Episode 6

We being attack!!!! infront of us is the empire that attacked russiu planet!... then we go n attacked the empire but we tought that we are winning but suddenly..... they keep comming..... we can't controlled it... we have limited army only... 

The mar forces was shakenning. they afraid to attack and they still continued attacking the empire one by one..... the mars foeces together have 200 battleship survives........ we see them struggling.... they even though survives till this moment!

 we also see them as a team attacked the carrier war ship that empire have.........  the carrier war ship struggled when the mars attack them... cause usually mars forces have small space ship and fast too!

we see them they are okay... then we continue fighting..

Suddenly!

my great euro spacecommand ship being attack... the empire spotted our command ship.... this is dangerrous!

they tottaly target on me! the space command ship...

with not much time left... I the great umar! fleww out some exotic seasonal missle that dissolve sapace ship..... but it not work to this guys!

 we know that their space material is not made by normal titanuim or others types of metals.... but they make of sapce water!....

 our command ship ar badly hurt.. and need repairs immediately!...... some of us thought that mars forces ar independant then us........

our guns turent and light saber we 70% detroyed!..

mars see that we being ataccked! miracly they help us....... they take down one by one! and the first wave finish.. our scout say that ... the scouts even donot know how MANY IS GOING TO COME NEXT!

to be continue on episode 7.... more n more interesting....
posted by Umar the great @ 4:16 AM   0 comments
Friday, April 10, 2009
Episode 5

episode 5

We been abush... suddenly they attacked our allies 'mars forces' one of the mars battle ship ar badly damaged!

we wanted to help but its too late.... 4 mars battle ship have explode during the battle..... and they all just feel wasted to follow....
 
we tell them that this place is far way from thier home... but if we work together can saved gunein planet together! but they all still afraid...... then let give them rest......
 there are 14023 mars soldier died in the ambush!...... mars people can't accept this lost... they have families in thier homes!

in the first place mars just good to defend thier self but in this kind of mission they are useless..... but the commander mars...... still have the spirits to fight! and they stop resting and....

now! they fly together with team work!...now they realise that... war gives exp!... the commander collect theirs battleships and carrier together and said that..." we come here to fight! we are not cowards! we can do this together! *crying* but this mission must take many scarifices! we must continue this mission to make our self proud of mars! COME ON my Soldiers!!! rise for MARS!!!!!!!!" the commander said! then suddenly they became more hyper active..... they started to teamwork and continue our jorney....... we look very pity for the mars forces....

we cannot do anything for them because thier food and ours ar different.... they use oil to fly! we use mind to fly!... it tottaly different things! so they are the Ones who can make their self survive! some of them cry to looked at the commander struggling to survive! and some of my commanders make them proud!

i cried for them! and  we continue thier journey!

 and at last we heard turret sound missle laser sound infront of us! but we can't see it is too foggy.... and suddenly!

To be continue in epidoe 6!!!!! be right back!



posted by Umar the great @ 10:25 PM   0 comments
Friday, April 3, 2009
Episode 4

Episode 4

   When we look behind....... we were suprise that a large forces.... from mars come... they talking to us but we can't understand a word... cause their language were totally different....... at least other planets we can understand thier signalling or words.. but this..one we can't understand a word or signalling.......so... we talk to themmm 'what do you want?' i said....

we were shock.... they just kill one of our spaceship..... but luckily one of our guys kno thier language... they say that they want to help as they are loser.... but we say that the forces that we are going to kill is strong..........

but then, they still following us... we tell them that they are not enough resources to survive for the journey to the russiu planet... but suddenly.... we saw something behind their forces... we saw a large ship carrying resource for their journey....

we laughed! we told them... ' so... u all are well prepared to going for battle for all these years...hahahaaa!' i said.....

so... we let them folow us....... they are to exited as their commander as looking evil but enosent... our army said that they are age of laser... they are surely not survived for the attacks and ambuse hitted to thier space battle ship.... but they are proud to fight... 'why don't we stopped them?' my commander said.... i replied ' it beacause they are proud to fight and they also want to explore the whole unvorse around us and take some suvineor to thier homes.....'...

but why don't they allied with the earth and protect earth? earth is wonderful and al lot to learn..?

we just dunno wat to say........ but we kno someday mars going to be strong planet........ after a few solar system...... finally

we reach umar world.... and my army of dreams are all ready waiting for my arrival.....! the mars forces we scared to look at us...... that why we told u  that mars are not so strong for the fight agaisnt strong enemies......

so.... at last we start our journey to save russiu planet...! we wanted to use the hyper blast to move super speed but mars forces are here to fight also.. we must not use the hyper or not the mar forces will lost their way and died alone!!.... when suddenly...

we feel not very ok.. SUDDENLY!!!!

to be continue Episode 5

posted by Umar the great @ 6:53 AM   0 comments